I also got the boys to present the writing that they had written that day this gives them a sense of ownership of their writing. Doing this with them makes it more enjoying for all of them, they look forward to presenting their writing after the lesson.
I now want to observe other teachers teach writing in different year levels, so I can see different ways that other teachers approach writing. I'm also going to be inquiring into strategies I can use to get students to use different sentence lengths and write effective paragraphs.